let's put it together, Saying it separately:
the cows inside us laugh at our Extreme attempts,
because we're afraid to Cast off what drinks from our hearts.
Rest awhile like dogs in the sun of summer,
Except stick in your tongues, and fight out each thought like gristle;
in Time this process, this reminder, won't be needed.
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Clever! Enjoyed the cows inside of us and sticking in your tongues!
ReplyDeleteQuite the secret! Good one Richelle!
ReplyDeleteaw thank you! I felt as though this was one of my worst :) because I was pretty stumped by this prompt, but thank you!
ReplyDeletenot at all. it's one your best. you're on quite a learning curve -- your best are getting better and better. apply this amazing learning curve to revision and you'll be published in no time. bravo.
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